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All in all, I really enjoyed this particular story. Anyone could spin a story around the idea of Weiss being team RWBY's leader, but you did a very good job of keeping me interested throughout the entire story. I also like that its a contrast from your more comedic works. It really shows the range of your writing talents when you can write 2 completely different genre's, both very well. The only critique i have is that it has a bit of a cliff hanger ending to me. Don't get me wrong it works as a complete story, but there is clearly a larger narrative you're working on, and because of that it wasn't as fulfilling as a standalone story.
So, I've been thinking about writing a book, or even finding a good artist and making a comic book/ graphic novel, but I want to practice my writing, so, I will be entering the world of fanfiction. 

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Prouzr Featured By Owner 1 day ago  New Deviant Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks for the fav :)
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Prouzr Featured By Owner 4 days ago  New Deviant Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks for the fav
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Prouzr Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2015  New Deviant Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks for the fav :)
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Prouzr Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2015  New Deviant Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks for the fav.
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Prouzr Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2015  New Deviant Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you for the fav.
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PatrickALyon Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2015   Traditional Artist
Thanks for the fave :)
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illuminantur Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2015  Student General Artist

Thanks for the continued support! I may have finished the RWBY art challenge, but I'm not done making RWBY fanart! :D Good luck with your book!

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Megzs Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2015
Thanks for the :+fav:
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Dragon-flame13 Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2015   Artisan Crafter
Thanks for faving, it means a lot ! :iconblackstarplz:
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TiedupTemari Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much for Watching! :happybounce:
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