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All in all, I really enjoyed this particular story. Anyone could spin a story around the idea of Weiss being team RWBY's leader, but you did a very good job of keeping me interested throughout the entire story. I also like that its a contrast from your more comedic works. It really shows the range of your writing talents when you can write 2 completely different genre's, both very well. The only critique i have is that it has a bit of a cliff hanger ending to me. Don't get me wrong it works as a complete story, but there is clearly a larger narrative you're working on, and because of that it wasn't as fulfilling as a standalone story.
So, I've been thinking about writing a book, or even finding a good artist and making a comic book/ graphic novel, but I want to practice my writing, so, I will be entering the world of fanfiction. 
So, I've been thinking about writing a book, or even finding a good artist and making a comic book/ graphic novel, but I want to practice my writing, so, I will be entering the world of fanfiction. 

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well9087 Featured By Owner May 6, 2015
Thanks for the fav :D
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Dakimomoe Featured By Owner May 1, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks a lot for the faves! :D
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frasian Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thx for faving >w<
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Puriz Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks for faving
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Puriz Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks for the fav :)
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joking611 Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2015
Thanks for the favorite!
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Mightypenguin18 Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you for the fav
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Reinver Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thanks for the fav :)
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Bardswing Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2015
Thanks for +fav 
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Barriss-Girl97 Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2015  Student General Artist
Thanks for the fav!
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