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Now I know I could catch alot of flack for this but I feel it needs to be said. In comparison to the fans ideas of the RWBY world and characters, volume 2 sucks. Take for instance Wiess. In the fandom, wiess is cold and unable to let anyone near because of abandonment issues created by her fathers absense. Volume 2 destroys this very tragic charcterization of Wiess in 2 ways. First is the inclusion of Neptune. Shipping aside the fact Wiess shows interest goes against the very good character the fandom birthed and instead makes her into a stereotypical idea of a teenaged girl.the inclusion of her sister winter adds to this by making her ideas of loneliness and separation from her family unrealistic. You can have a bad parent, but theres no such thing as a bad sibling. They mess up sometimes sure, annoy the hellout of us, yet theyre still there for us when we need them. There is no eay a sibling would let wiess feel as lonely as her song makes her out to be. All in all I think the fandoms version of RWBY is a much darker, well characterised, visceral ecperience than what RT has crafted. Ps please forgive spelling errors was done with my shitty phone text pad.
August Schnee was troubled. He sat in a chair in the far corner of the room, but even here he couldn’t avoid the idiots in his family trying schmoose there way into his good graces. But that wasn’t what was troubling him. It was the look that, in recent years, had been permanently set on his daughters face. It seemed to start the day he told about the marriage arrangement he had set up between Wiess and the son of a competing company. It had made Schnee dust the only name in both dust mining and advanced technology. But it seemed to have cost his daughter dearly.
She never smiled. She only sat there, a near permanent frown etched upon her beautiful face, and it hurt. It hurt to see her so sad, just like it hurt to see her crying after every lecture he gave her about being perfect for their families company when she was growing up. He regretted it each night afterwards, in his bed when it was just him, his sleeping wife, and his thoughts. He didn’t mean to make her cry, but he always managed to come up with an excuse for why she needed to be lectured. He didn’t mean to demand perfection, he knew it was impossible, and the Wiess tried harder than anyone he had ever seen to achieve it. But what did he give her for her efforts? An undoubtedly unwanted husband and another lecture about how she needed to produce an heir.  But little did he know he would soon have a chance to make things right, when a beautiful blonde and her faunus wife marched onto the gala entrance, an angry frown on her face.
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Here is the first couple paragraphs of my first fanfic. let me know how it is!
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So, I've been thinking about writing a book, or even finding a good artist and making a comic book/ graphic novel, but I want to practice my writing, so, I will be entering the world of fanfiction. 
Now I know I could catch alot of flack for this but I feel it needs to be said. In comparison to the fans ideas of the RWBY world and characters, volume 2 sucks. Take for instance Wiess. In the fandom, wiess is cold and unable to let anyone near because of abandonment issues created by her fathers absense. Volume 2 destroys this very tragic charcterization of Wiess in 2 ways. First is the inclusion of Neptune. Shipping aside the fact Wiess shows interest goes against the very good character the fandom birthed and instead makes her into a stereotypical idea of a teenaged girl.the inclusion of her sister winter adds to this by making her ideas of loneliness and separation from her family unrealistic. You can have a bad parent, but theres no such thing as a bad sibling. They mess up sometimes sure, annoy the hellout of us, yet theyre still there for us when we need them. There is no eay a sibling would let wiess feel as lonely as her song makes her out to be. All in all I think the fandoms version of RWBY is a much darker, well characterised, visceral ecperience than what RT has crafted. Ps please forgive spelling errors was done with my shitty phone text pad.

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thanks for the fav again on Rose Thief, I'll probably update it with a coloured version soon :D
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