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All in all, I really enjoyed this particular story. Anyone could spin a story around the idea of Weiss being team RWBY's leader, but you did a very good job of keeping me interested throughout the entire story. I also like that its a contrast from your more comedic works. It really shows the range of your writing talents when you can write 2 completely different genre's, both very well. The only critique i have is that it has a bit of a cliff hanger ending to me. Don't get me wrong it works as a complete story, but there is clearly a larger narrative you're working on, and because of that it wasn't as fulfilling as a standalone story.
August Schnee was troubled. He sat in a chair in the far corner of the room, but even here he couldn’t avoid the idiots in his family trying schmoose there way into his good graces. But that wasn’t what was troubling him. It was the look that, in recent years, had been permanently set on his daughters face. It seemed to start the day he told about the marriage arrangement he had set up between Wiess and the son of a competing company. It had made Schnee dust the only name in both dust mining and advanced technology. But it seemed to have cost his daughter dearly.
She never smiled. She only sat there, a near permanent frown etched upon her beautiful face, and it hurt. It hurt to see her so sad, just like it hurt to see her crying after every lecture he gave her about being perfect for their families company when she was growing up. He regretted it each night afterwards, in his bed when it was just him, his sleeping wife, and his thoughts. He didn’t mean to make her cry, but he always managed to come up with an excuse for why she needed to be lectured. He didn’t mean to demand perfection, he knew it was impossible, and the Wiess tried harder than anyone he had ever seen to achieve it. But what did he give her for her efforts? An undoubtedly unwanted husband and another lecture about how she needed to produce an heir.  But little did he know he would soon have a chance to make things right, when a beautiful blonde and her faunus wife marched onto the gala entrance, an angry frown on her face.
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Here is the first couple paragraphs of my first fanfic. let me know how it is!
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So, I've been thinking about writing a book, or even finding a good artist and making a comic book/ graphic novel, but I want to practice my writing, so, I will be entering the world of fanfiction. 
So, I've been thinking about writing a book, or even finding a good artist and making a comic book/ graphic novel, but I want to practice my writing, so, I will be entering the world of fanfiction. 

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M-Ichihara1594 Featured By Owner 3 days ago  Student Traditional Artist
Thanks for the :+fav:
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AdvancedDefense Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2015  Hobbyist Filmographer
Thanks for the :+fav:!
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JamesCranmer Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks for the faves, It really appreciate it!
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SylverLyning67 Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2015  Student Traditional Artist
Thanks for adding A White Rose Merry Christmas to your favorites!  It is greatly appreciated! :D
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AllForFire Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2015
Thank you so much from the bottom of my heart for the Fav of my Work "Mending Broken Wings (Part 1)!Heart Huggle! 
Tell me, was their anything in particular you might want to say about it? I'm more than happy to discuss my works!
If you'd like to see more of Mhyrra and Sera, as well as the rest of their adventures, you're more than welcome.^^
Just having you fav makes it all worth it.^^
You're a beautiful and wonderful person, inside and out.
Cheers, Warm Tidings and Happy New Year to You and All Your Kin!Huggle!
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indianaj2098 Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2015
I've had many a thank you for a favorite, but none so bright as yours. Thank you. as for your work, I really think you got Sera's character down pat, and I love the idea of a mischievous Qunari, which again, you did very well.
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MyHappiiDays Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you for the favorite! ( ovo )/
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osuperman1964 Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2014
Thanks for the fave-ROBIN - 
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janneway Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2014
Thanks for the fav! :)
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FuzzyRedPants Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
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