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All in all, I really enjoyed this particular story. Anyone could spin a story around the idea of Weiss being team RWBY's leader, but you did a very good job of keeping me interested throughout the entire story. I also like that its a contrast from your more comedic works. It really shows the range of your writing talents when you can write 2 completely different genre's, both very well. The only critique i have is that it has a bit of a cliff hanger ending to me. Don't get me wrong it works as a complete story, but there is clearly a larger narrative you're working on, and because of that it wasn't as fulfilling as a standalone story.
So, I've been thinking about writing a book, or even finding a good artist and making a comic book/ graphic novel, but I want to practice my writing, so, I will be entering the world of fanfiction. 


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PatrickALyon Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2015   Traditional Artist
Thanks for the fave :)
illuminantur Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2015  Student General Artist

Thanks for the continued support! I may have finished the RWBY art challenge, but I'm not done making RWBY fanart! :D Good luck with your book!

Megzs Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2015
Thanks for the :+fav:
Dragon-flame13 Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2015   Artisan Crafter
Thanks for faving, it means a lot ! :iconblackstarplz:
TiedupTemari Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much for Watching! :happybounce:
illuminantur Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2015  Student General Artist
Thank you so much for the fav! I'm glad you're enjoying my RWBY Art Challenge drawings. Huggle!

If you're interested in seeing my previous work, feel free to check out the rest of my gallery.  I will be updating it frequently, especially for the RWBY art challenge.

If you want updates when I submit work, add me to your watch!

Thanks again!
Shi-Yin Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2015  Student General Artist
Thanks for the fave! :)
well9087 Featured By Owner May 6, 2015
Thanks for the fav :D
Dakimomoe Featured By Owner May 1, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks a lot for the faves! :D
frasian Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thx for faving >w<
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