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All in all, I really enjoyed this particular story. Anyone could spin a story around the idea of Weiss being team RWBY's leader, but you did a very good job of keeping me interested throughout the entire story. I also like that its a contrast from your more comedic works. It really shows the range of your writing talents when you can write 2 completely different genre's, both very well. The only critique i have is that it has a bit of a cliff hanger ending to me. Don't get me wrong it works as a complete story, but there is clearly a larger narrative you're working on, and because of that it wasn't as fulfilling as a standalone story.
So, I've been thinking about writing a book, or even finding a good artist and making a comic book/ graphic novel, but I want to practice my writing, so, I will be entering the world of fanfiction. 
So, I've been thinking about writing a book, or even finding a good artist and making a comic book/ graphic novel, but I want to practice my writing, so, I will be entering the world of fanfiction. 

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Reinver Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thanks for the fav :)
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Bardswing Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2015
Thanks for +fav 
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Barriss-Girl97 Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2015  Student General Artist
Thanks for the fav!
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M-Ichihara1594 Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2015  Student Traditional Artist
Thanks for the :+fav:
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AdvancedDefense Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2015  Hobbyist Filmographer
Thanks for the :+fav:!
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JamesCranmer Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks for the faves, It really appreciate it!
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SylverLyning67 Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks for adding A White Rose Merry Christmas to your favorites!  It is greatly appreciated! :D
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AllForFire Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2015
Thank you so much from the bottom of my heart for the Fav of my Work "Mending Broken Wings (Part 1)!Heart Huggle! 
Tell me, was their anything in particular you might want to say about it? I'm more than happy to discuss my works!
If you'd like to see more of Mhyrra and Sera, as well as the rest of their adventures, you're more than welcome.^^
Just having you fav makes it all worth it.^^
You're a beautiful and wonderful person, inside and out.
Cheers, Warm Tidings and Happy New Year to You and All Your Kin!Huggle!
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indianaj2098 Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2015
I've had many a thank you for a favorite, but none so bright as yours. Thank you. as for your work, I really think you got Sera's character down pat, and I love the idea of a mischievous Qunari, which again, you did very well.
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MyHappiiDays Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you for the favorite! ( ovo )/
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